I'm so impressed with what you have already written.....so let's try this. Each of your are reading a book of your choice. I would like you to pay attention to how the author creates sentences with the intention of making the reader feel or think something. I have given you many examples from SOTB.
Here's your chance to share ONE POWERFUL SENTENCE from your own book. Please use " " marks around the sentence and copy it word for word. We also need the title of the book and the author. Then please explain what it made you feel in DETAIL!!!!!!